A brief comment on the blue sky disaster by lilies

A brief comment on "Bi Tianjie" published on 2010-10-2619:20

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I finished reading it in one go and said with great admiration that it was really well written!

From the beginning, 50,000 elite soldiers came to the city of Liangzhou, but it was only Ning Wang Chongguan angrily and became a beauty, and I felt good-looking. The key is that this is still a light fairy work. Hey hey, it's really my mouth... Speaking of this, I can't help but pull out a female article "Old Tree Blooms" that I read at a certain point, and that article is also fairy. The work involves gods and demons, and the style of writing is light and simple, which is very good. It is a pity that the author has not been updated so far... However, the setting of this article is wider than that, involving not only the sky, but also the world. I have to say that such a big scene of heaven and earth is really difficult to grasp, but the author writes something different. Noodles, hehe, it's very beautiful.

What particularly attracts me is the brisk style of the article at the beginning of the article and the indifferent nature of Tourmaline that is not moved by foreign things. Ha ha, maybe I have read too much life and death, and I suddenly lost interest in that type of text, especially the poor brushwork and poor writing. Reading it only makes people feel bad, unlike smart Generation, the pain written is also delicate and beautiful... Unfortunately, such an article is too rare, so I don't touch the sadistic article, so I like such a relaxed article as "Blue Sky Disaster". At the beginning, the male fairy's stingy, the anger of King Ning's crown, the indifference of the blue, and the deep affection of the King Ning made this article lively, light and fascinating, so I consciously read it down, and was entangled by the entanglement between Ning Xilu and the emperor, hoping to enter the article for a glance. Ha, just read it all at once. One afternoon.

So, it is very responsible to say that the sense of substitution of this article is very good, especially for people who like this style of writing so much, it is simply a must-kill! Ha ha, but what makes me a little dissatisfied is that the author involves a lot of power struggles in the later article. I dare not say that such an arrangement is not good, but to a certain extent, such a serious theme has weakened the brisk wind of this article. To be honest, I saw a little impatience later, just for the purpose of the tourmaline The character wanted to see what would happen to her in the future, so I kept looking at it.

If there is discomfort, find the reason. I think about it carefully. Maybe it was attracted by my previous relaxed humor of the article. Later, when I saw less in the article, I was a little disappointed, so I would have the feeling above. Ha ha, of course, this is just my own opinion, mixed with a trace of my own preferences, so I just say it to the author, right or not, dare not say it.

However, continue to look down. It was not until the birth of Wenquxing and the king of Ning changed his mind by mistake. Ziyao and Bixi began to be entangled, and the fake disaster gradually turned into a real disaster. King Ning also had a double seal of Qingming's identity, and the demon clan gradually appeared. Only then did I understand the intention of the previous author, "Blue Sky Disaster" in This has been confirmed, saying that it is the disaster of the tourmaline. I'm afraid that this disaster will be a disaster between immortals and demons... Because of the need to lay such a large background, the solemnity written earlier is reasonable, so I rekindled my interest.

However, the details of this article are a little rough. Maybe the author wants to shape the detached nature of Tourmaline, so he has taken some plots, such as the death of Ayi and the emperor, but he thought it was a little simple. Since a cold person like Bixi has moved seven emotions and six desires, he simply took every point. The pain is shown to the fullest. Isn't this more likely to make Bixi sink as soon as possible? Ha ha, but although that's the case, in fact, I don't like the sinking of the tourmaline. I'd rather she always be a muddy and unstained indifferent woman, haha, that's more ingrained with my aesthetics...

Well, I accidentally wrote so much about the content of the article. I wanted to talk about the plot characters in this article, but I found that the wordy words above had roughly included my views, so I stopped writing them separately. Anyway, I said my heart. Just say it, hehe, looking forward to the next article, come on, author!

Huashan - Lilies!