Unprehistoric huge pit

Thank you for your criticism and correction! Thank you very much! Yu Fei also explained his point of view:

Chapter 1-5 of this book tells the story of the protagonist's rebirth through a different world, not to mention this. Chapter 6-11 only tells the story of what happened*, so it is more general and the number of words in the chapters is short. Chapter 12-80 is a flashback, telling the story before the protagonist was sealed. The cause of the whole incident was that Zeus flirted with the demon princess and led to the tragic death of the demon princess, which triggered a war between the demon clan and the divine clan. Pluto dispatched skeleton soldiers to kill the demon clan and planted the seeds of hatred with the demon clan. Locke, the demon son, escaped from death and vowed to avenge the destruction of the earth, thus becoming the enemy of Pluto Zeus.

Locke embarked on the road of revenge and came to Atlantis on the way. He met the fake queen Shura, a high-tech alien. His spaceship crashed, and the soul energy was attached to Pluto, suppressing Pluto's consciousness. Therefore, Locke did not know that Shura was Pluto. This pit was buried after 80 chapters. In the context of an energy shortage in Atlantis, Locke and Shirley led an expedition to Aryan in order to obtain an "air chariot" to deal with the skeleton soldiers, and finally died. This is Locke's first life. In Locke's first life, there was also a mystery of blood and jade, vampire beasts and Uvo, that is, the resentment between blood clans and werewolves. These pits dug at the beginning were buried in more than 100 chapters in Locke's second life. Chapter 81-137 is Locke's second life. After the seal was lifted, he lost part of his memory and still did not know that Pluto was the "queen" of Atlantis. He hated Pluto and was grateful for Pluto's life-saving grace, so he fell into a dilemma. In the third life, Locke was relatively moldy. In order to save his ancestor Franklin, he traveled back to modern times and lost his divine power. In addition to hearing and vision surpassing ordinary people, he was almost a useless person...

Ha ha, it is not an exaerration to say that this book is an unprecedented pit. Of course, Yu Fei is writing a novel for the first time, and there will definitely be many shortcomings, but I personally think that this book has a lot to read, and the wonderful plots are at the end of 15 chapters. As long as readers have the patience to read it, they will definitely like it.

Because this book tells a Western fantasy story, it is impossible for the protagonist to practice skills such as hardened body, such as level and stage. The protagonist's enemies are powerful. Among them, there are not only the magical prince of the sea, the high-tech Prince Arthur, and the blood clan who can use magic. Therefore, he must have certain skills. Only in this way, when he meets the enemy, even if he is not a hundred battles, he will not fight everywhere. Let's talk about the problem of "fac" below:

1. Locke will cast a spell and use the "migration method", which was taught by Mr. Pierre when he was a demon king. After 80, the seal was lifted in detail.

2. He has wings and can transform, which is what the devil was born with.

3. In Chapter 15, Locke happened to meet the blood lotus and the snake dragon grass, ate the blood lotus, and obtained the power of Mother Gaia. As long as he stood on the earth, his power was endless. He subdued the snake and dragon grass and obtained the snake and dragon staff. He had the ability to summon hurricanes as a general and drive Wanmu as a pawn. He also defeated Aryan and defeated Prince Arthur laid the foreshadowing.

4, In chapters 53 and 54, Locke fell into the devil's sea and met the fire god Heweistos sealed by Zeus, thus learning the "fire against the sky" and laying the groundwork for his great power during the later expedition to Aryan. I think these two chapters are also wonderful.

5, the second life, after 80, Locke was reborn after his death, the seal was lifted, and the identity of the demon king was restored. Because Pluto did not completely lift the seal for him when he died, he lost part of his memory, but he retained the divine power of death and would use the "hell fire" to incarnate. If it becomes smoke, it will be bounded.

hehe, add a little more.

There are three male pig feet in this book, Locke, Shura and Pluto. From the first life to the third life, the number of characters has gradually increased. As for the gods in Greek mythology, including Zeus and Apollo. Hey hey!