Respection
Just half a month after the opening of the book, I once asked others if the beginning of the book could be accepted, and the other party said yes.
I hesitated for a long time, but I still didn't change it. First, I'm afraid that the following plot will not be correct. Second, I have no way to write.
I modified it a little today, and I feel much more comfortable. To be honest, I have been complaining about this beginning for a long time. A good word is an old saying, and a bad word is pretentious.
I'm very happy to write a book vertically and horizontally. The editor takes good care of the newcomers, and there are a lot of recommendations, but my clicks and collections just can't go up. I thought about it for a long time and finally found out the reason. Writing is a problem, and there is also a sense of responsibility. From the enthusiasm of the beginning of the book to now, I am a little numb. I began to randomly code a chapter one Chapter.
There is another reason, probably because the plot development is too slow. Someone has mentioned this more than once, and I am also anxious, but the hand on the keyboard is just not at his command. Often if I want to create such a character, he will become such a character, for which I have also reviewed.
Recently, I wanted to write a new book again. I casually drew up an outline of Xianxia and didn't dare to move it in the e-disk. I found that if I read two articles at the same time, my brain would be overwhelmed. (╯▽╰) Well, I admit that my head is not good.
This book is slowly warming up, that is to say, it is not far from **. Therefore, if you think it's plain, please come back and read my article. I'm going to make major changes these days and try to improve my writing level. ( However, we don't expect it to be too high. We only have kindergarten level)